New Stories Need Love - Scars

Scars by Jazz09

Edward/Bella

Summary -Bella is in a deeply abusive relationship, while Edward is lost after the death of his girlfriend. Can they overcome the past and save each other?

This fic has some underlying dark themes; Bella is in an abusive relationship with James and Edward is mourning the loss of his girlfriend. I like the path the author has set us on. She is slowly bringing Edward and Bella together and the reader can clearly see that these two are going to need one another. The pace of the story is perfect and I'm anxious to see how it all unfolds. Can Edward let go of his demons? How will Bella get away from James? This is definitely an under appreciated fic, but once you start reading, I think you'll be happy you found it.

My heart broke for poor Bella & Edward in this fic. They have both been through hell and have a long, difficult road ahead of them. I can't wait to see how they help each other heal.  I am so glad to be reading this fic and I look forward to seeing where the author is taking the story. Please go leave her some love, as it is well-deserved.

New Stories Need Love - A Fallen Empire

A Fallen Empire by FallenAuthors

Jasper/Bella

Summary - What happens when Edward decides he can't change Bella and their plans of marriage fall apart? What will lead them to Volterra to meet a new vampire w/a unique power? Will the Volutri let the Cullen's leave? Non-Cannon Pairings. JxB EmxV ExA

You can also check out their blog for what the characters are wearing...

http://afallenempire.blogspot.com/

Cullen818 - So, the Cullen's are going on an adventure to Italy. The story is two chapters in and couples are switching rather quickly, but the collaborating authors are setting up the story. It's different and I'm curious to see where they're headed with this. I can already see that Jasper is Bella's calming source. They seem to be drawn to one another and that makes for a good fit. It's such a new story and it flows really well, so jump in now before there are too many chapters to catch up on. I also have a feeling the Volturi is up to something devious.

JaspersDarlinKathy - So this story is definitely different, but that's what I like in a story. This story is definitely one that I am looking forward to reading an update. I want to know what's going to happen and I am going to be giddy with anticipation for that alert in my inbox. I won't give away much since this story is only two chapters in, but I will tell you this, this story is definitely not something you have ever read before and you will enjoy this story as much as I did. Go check it out. Jasper, Bella, Edward, Alice, Emmett, Rosalie, Carlisle, and Esme all the Cullen's we love in a completely different way. I love it!

TwiCarol - I enjoyed what is written so far in this story, and I am very interested to see the journey that these two ladies are taking our favorite family on. It's different from others I've read and I can't wait to see what is going to happen in Volterra. Fascinating and fun times ahead, so get reading and be sure to leave the ladies some review love. They deserve it!

New Stories Need Love - I Caught Fire

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I Caught Fire by glitteratiglue

Jasper/Bella

Summary - Bella Swan came to study in London to escape her painful past. One night of passion with Jasper Whitlock: a charismatic, yet haunted bartender will change everything. Can they find salvation in one another? AH,OOC.M for lemons/profanity/disturbing themes.

Cullen818 - I love this story! But really, who wouldn't love this Jasper? As far as human Jasper's go, he's right up my alley. He's hot, has a tortured past and a tattoo to go with that said past. I can't wait to see how this fic unfolds. The story is only four chapters in, and it has left me craving for more. It's one of those fics that I think about throughout the day. And, the first one-night stand lemon was hawt!

TwiCarol - I love this story TOO! It's well-written, Jasper is smoking hot and Bella is once again a lucky, lucky lady! She may have been through a terrible experience, but she gets Jasper, so... lucky, I say. I am really looking forward to seeing where the author is going with this story. If you aren't reading this already, you better go get started now. You won't be sorry, promise. That lemon is completely f*ckhawt! *thud*

New Stories Need Love - Fallen Princess

Fallen Princess by Bforqueen

Summary - She was born to evil, meant to lead. But all she wanted was to be loved. When her life slides downhill fast,can she get it together in time to save herself and the rest of the world? - Volturi, Post-BD, will involve Cullens and Pack.

Cullen818 - So, I'm not going to lie, this is a hard fic to sell. It's not your average mainstream FF, meaning the central characters are not Bella and Edward. Now, with that being said, I still want to rec it. It's different, unique and certainly deserves the exposure.

The central character is Luciana, the daughter of Caius. Right off the bat, we have the element of the dark. The first two chapters focus heavily on the Volturi which isn't a bad thing because they're an interesting bunch, and I think their story should be told. This author is well on her way to spinning a tale so far from anything we're used to that you should jump in  now. I don't think you'll be sorry.

This is a newborn (get it) story...it was just published this week.

JaspersDarlinKathy - So would you like to read a story that isn't focused on Bella and Edward? Well I do and I am here to tell you that Fallen Princess is that story. Two chapters in and I already know that this story is going to be amazing. It already has so much potential and I would gladly recommend this fic to everyone that I know. Go check it out and be ready to read a fantastic story.

TwiCarol - I thoroughly enjoyed the way this started and I'm really looking forward to seeing where the author is going to take this story. Please don't be put off by the fact that it doesn't start off with the usual suspects. It is well-written, interesting and I am already rooting for Luciana, considering the lack of love in her upbringing. And, just so you know, there's some HOT Demetri action in the first chapter after the prologue. So what are you waiting for? Off you go... you'll love it... I know I did!

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 I got a story update the other day in the form of an a/n stating that the author was going to wrap up her story prematurely, and retire from FF. That made me sad because the story was really good, but I get the writer's problem. We put so much work into these stories and we want to know that we are getting a reaction from the reader. Don't let that happen to you. Send us your story link...

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New Stories Need Love - Playing With Fire

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This week we feature a darker, more tortured Edward. The story  is currently two chapters in...

Playing With Fire by kleepalmer

Full Summary: Bella Swan has been writing an untold story in her head since she was a child, only finally bringing it to life at the age of eighteen. Now, four years later, Bella's manuscript is placed in the sought-after hands of Mr. E. A. Cullen, a highly-regarded book publisher in Seattle. After countless late nights at the office and not-so-subtle advances made by Mr. Cullen himself, love blossoms… only to be ripped to shreds when Mr. Cullen's business and personal life is destroyed and he is forced to relocate. Will Bella and Edward make the essential decision that will hold their burning flame, or will distance and the death of a dear friend finally crack Mr. Cullen and render him incapable of loving at all?

Slightly OOC, AU, AH.

Cullen818 - The intro to  the story is a teaser of things to come. I thought that was a clever way to draw the reader in., and now I'm interested to find out exactly what point the snippet will occur in the story. Chapter two starts the actual fic, and I love how kleepalmer brings Edward and Bella together. I especially liked EPOV. He seems intense and knows what he wants. The story has a great hook, and seems well thought out even after reading just two chapters. I'm anxious to see where this is headed.

TwiCarol - WOW! That was my immediate reaction to the prologue... it was a fantastic start, that had me hooked from the very beginning and breathless with shock by the end of the intro. The first proper chapter is just as great and I am really looking forward to reading more. It's different and original, and you should go read it RIGHT NOW! This story deserves lots of love. Please go leave it some. I have no doubt that you will be just as eager as I am to know what happens next.

JaspersDarlinKathy - What can I say about this fic? I love what the author has so far. Two chapters in and I am hoping that the third chapter is posted soon. I won't give away much with my review except you've gotta go and read this amazing Edward/Bella fic. So go on and go read it. Edward is very sexy and irresistable in this fic. Will Bella be able to resist him? I know I wouldn't be able to.

New Stories Need Love... After the Storm

After the Storm by tjbaby

Edward/Jasper

Summary -A self-confessed, vampire-obsessed man, Jasper Whitlock comes across one such being one dark, stormy night. The vampire, Edward Cullen, affects his life in such a way that Jasper has to decide what he is willing to do for life and love. AU,E/J,dark

banner by vampireisthenewblack

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Cullen818 - Let me start off by saying that I don't read a whole lotta slash, but when I do, Jasper and Edward are my favorite pairing. I love this one because it features a dark, vamp Edward and a self-proclaimed, vampire obsessed human Jasper. How unique! This fic is not only well written, but the plot is thought out and each chapter flows seamlessly into the next.

I love the premise of this story and how tjbaby brings these two together. The last chapter had me actually feeling how much they love one another despite what's going on in their current situation. They have much to overcome and many obstacles are in their way. The fic is currently ten chapters in, but I promise it will leave you wanting more. Stop by and check it out, and don't forget to leave a review!

TwiCarol - This fic is very well written and draws you in from the beginning. It is dark, different and intriguing, and will definitely leave you wanting more. It certainly deserves more reviews than it has right now, so please go leave it some love. Vamp Edward and human Jasper... mmmm... go on, you know you want to read it!

JaspersDarlinKathy -  Tjbaby is an amazing writer and the story pulls you in from the very first sentence. Once you're pulled in, you'll never want to be let go. Edward and Jasper are unlike any others and I am so happy to be reading this fic. I can't wait to see where she takes these two favorite characters of mine. If you haven't started reading this fic yet, you clearly don't know what you are missing, but let me just say that you are missing one hell of a story and that just sucks for you. Go ahead and read, you won't be sorry.

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Here is our first story...

Disclaimer - Story contains serious adult content and may not even be accepted or appropriate for many adults. This is a dark fic that contains dark themes. Proceed with extreme caution.

Breaking by hopeforastalemate

Carlisle

Summary - Dr. Carlisle Cullen, always perfect, always in control. What happens when his family decides he needs to be broken...for his own good? Dark AU story without Jacob, the wolves, or Renesmee. All vampire.

Cullen818 - This is an amazing read. It's certainly different and clearly falls under the dark fic category. Hopeforastalemate is an incredible writer who has a consistent handle on her subject. The story flow and depth of her characters are superb. If  you are a fan of these sort of fics, I think you'll enjoy this one. I also think it's worth mentioning that Carlisle really isn't the Cullen children's biological father. Can you guess where it's headed?

TwiCarol - This is Carlisle Cullen as you have never seen him before, so brace yourselves. It is a very well-written fic, that draws you in and keeps you reading, even when you are shocked by what is happening. If you are into seriously dark fics, then this one is definitely for you. This lady is a great writer and she deserves way more reviews than she has now, so go leave her some. Just remember to keep an open mind and proceed with caution.

JaspersDarlinKathy - Holy hell. I have never and I mean never read a fic with Carlisle being portrayed this way, but I absofuckinglutely loved it. I loved every chapter in this fic. Now keep in mind that this is a dark fic but well worth the read. If you like the darkness then you'll love this story. Please run on over to this fic and read it and give the author some love in the form of a review. I am so looking forward to reading more from this author. She is truly a superb writer and she has a fantastic fic that is waiting to be read. Go on, don't walk over there, run. You won't be sorry.