Monday, September 20, 2010

Cullen818 Fic Rec - Million Dollar Baby


Summary - When Renee is diagnosed with a terminal illness, Isabella makes the ultimate sacrifice. Selling herself to the highest bidder to do with her as they please may just prove to be more than she bargained for. OOC AH/AU

So, in keeping with my recent obsession of AH E/B stories, here I am with Million Dollar Baby. Again, I've managed to find an Edward that I could absolutely devour. In an anxiously awaiting the next chapter sorta way.

The premise starts out a little depressing. Poor Bella is desperate. Her mom needs a serious operation and the family has no money. What's a girl to do?  Sell herself, of course!  Now, I'm just saying, if I ever had to sell my body for a million dollars and be someones sex slave for five years, well, who better than to have buy me then Edward Fucking Cullen?  KWIM?

In all seriousness, I don't condone one selling themselves into sexual servitude, but this is fiction and let me tell you this is not a fic about being degraded and abused. Bella may have had to do a desperate thing, but she finds that it isn't that awful.

Edward is his usual smug, controlling self, but boy is he sexy. The lemons in this story will soak your panties and have you clawing at your significant other!  My poor husband has no idea what has gotten into me!  But, I digress.  Here's a little example...


"I'm pretty sure I told you that you have the night off," he said, scooting his chair back a bit to give me more room to work with.

"You did." I unzipped his pants and laid the flaps of his pants open as I planted open-mouth kisses along the bulge just under his Calvin Kleins.

Edward ran his fingers through my hair and then cupped my chin, lifting it so that I met his gaze. "If you keep that shit up much longer, I'm not going to be able to stop you."

"Then don't," I said, dipping my head down to continue my previous actions.

He pushed his chair back further until he was just out of my reach. "Not until I've had my dessert."

Without warning, he lifted me up and sat me on the edge of the table, pushing the dinner dishes back. His hands were on both of my knees as he spread my legs and pulled himself closer. Then he moved them up my thighs slowly, dipping under the hem of his shirt and pushing it up along the way.

We both watched as he revealed the nakedness that lie beneath and I gasped when I heard a feral growl from deep in his chest. I had always kept myself sufficiently groomed in that area because…well, you just never know when you might end up in some sort of freak accident and someone might have the need to see something down there. And let's face it, freak accidents where I was concerned wouldn't be all that freakish at all.

He licked his lips as he ogled my cooch, and then he finally averted his eyes to mine. "I'm sure you won't mind if I just kiss this and make it all better."

Without waiting for my response, he spread me wider and began to suck the skin on the inside of my left thigh.

"Um…Edward?" I started in a shaky voice.

"Hmm?" he hummed as he continued to work his way up my thigh.

"Do you really think that the dining room table is the best place to do this? I mean, it can't be very sanitary."

"I eat all my meals at the table," he mumbled against my thigh.

I suppose he had a point and I probably wasn't going to win the argument, even if I really wanted to. Besides, it didn't even matter because by then, he'd reached my center and his nose was nuzzling my love nubbin'. I felt his tongue run along my folds and I grabbed onto the hair of his head.

"You smell so good, Isabella. And you taste even better," he moaned against my pussy. Then his hand ran along the underside of my right thigh and he lifted my leg, draping it over his shoulder.

I watched as his tongue continued to lick at my center and then he captured my clit with his lips and sucked chastely before flicking it with his tongue. He looked up at me and winked while his serpent-like tongue sped up, and a pleasure like I've never known shot through body and my head dropped back.

"Look at me," his husky voice said. "I want you to watch me feed on you."

"Oh God," I groaned, lifting my head to watch him as he ordered.

First one and then another finger disappeared inside me and he moved them in and out while the fingers of his other hand spread my lips apart and he sucked my clit into his mouth. Then he pushed his fingers all the way in and curled them back and forth, and I couldn't help the pornstar-like moan that came from somewhere in the back of my throat.

"Mmm, you like that, don't you?" he asked and then flattened his tongue out, taking a long lick from my opening to my clit where he resumed his suckling.

Okay, I'm not giving it all away for free on the Naughty Girl Blog. You want more? Go read it!

There's a reason this fic is so popular!  It's sexy, funny (Bella refers to her lady parts as "Double Agent Coochie" but you'll have to read to see why) and of course, there's angst because we all know I'm not happy unless someone else is unhappy!  But, I have a good feeling this will all work out. I also love reading a vulnerable side of Edward and this fic has that to!

This is a WIP, but the chapters are worth waiting for. I promise. I'm so addicted!

Thanks clpsuperstar for sharing your wicked imagination with us!

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